HH New Yaky Weaving - 10 by Janet Collection

Original content: "The beautiful princess rode through the enchanted forest on her majestic white horse. She had long golden hair that shone in the sunlight, and her dress sparkled like a thousand stars. The birds chirped melodiously as she passed by, and the flowers bloomed in her wake. She was on a quest to save her kingdom from the evil sorcerer who had cast a spell of darkness over the land. With her bravery and intelligence, she would stop at nothing to bring light back to her people."

Revised content: Through the enchanted forest rode the beautiful princess on her majestic white horse. Her long golden hair shimmered in the sunlight, and her dress sparkled like a thousand stars. The melodious chirping of birds accompanied her as she passed by, with flowers blooming in her wake. Her quest was to save the kingdom from the evil sorcerer who had enveloped the land in darkness. With bravery and intelligence, she was determined to restore light and hope to her people, no matter the obstacles she faced.

Word count: 98

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